【急募】英語に自信ニキきてくれ★２

ワイのレス低評価すごいんだが何が悪いのか教えてくれ

スレタイ:
Damn liberal media.
https://i.redd.it/g5hbfdaw0kg31.jpg


ワイのレス:
Most women aren't interested in drive and they will buy automated car which they don't have to drive.
Men want to control their car and cling to MT sports car, and tend to crash the car.

本スレ:
https://www.reddit.c.../damn_liberal_media/

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